Animatic for my short
Ok sorry about the delay but I was a bit paranoid that someone would steal my idea that I didn’t want to show it until now.
Anyway, here it is for the ones who haven’t seen it yet.
While working on the layout I realised that some areas still needed a bit more definition so back to the drawing boards.
Thats a sharp lookin animatic Oliver!!! Look forward to seeing your progress
ae oliver, simple and snap, that´s good, you gonna have time to spend on the animation making it shine. I just wonder if you could make clearer that he is a vampire, with same signs in his house, dunno, maybe a coffin in the back or something. ok we don´t see his image in the mirror but samething else just to comfirm. dunno just my opinion.
well done, have you started again school or still in break?
you are right Daniel, thanks
and yeah I am on a break at the moment looking for work just like you 😉
i like it, a nice idea thats short and simple.
i like the way it starts and it’s a bit confusing, i just think that when you want the audience to get that he’s a vampire it should be clearer. maybe you see he’s teeth a bit earlyer or something, i don’t know if thats the best way or even a good way, but i think you should try and find a way.
good stuff keep working on it